Tips for Staying Healthy
To stay healthy has serval ways. If you do the ways very well, I promise you can have good health. First of all, you should keep in good mood, some one say, three horselaugh everyday keep the dactor away. In addition, you eat more healthy food, and keep the junk food away.The most importantly, to do exercise regular, you shold do twice a week at least. Finally, you have to get rid of the bad habits. To keep the ways, you can get good health.
posted by 林小雞 @ 1:57 AM
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To stay healthy has serval ways
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There are seval ways to stay healthy.
keep in "a" good mood
someone say
someone says...
you eat more healthy food, and keep the junk food away.
you should eat more healthy food, and keep the junk food away.
do exercise regular
do exercise regularly
you shold do twice a week at least
我覺得exercise比do 還明確
"to do exercise regular"should be"...regularly";"some one say"should be"someone says"or"some people say"
someone "said"
more "much"
three horselaugh everyday "keeps" the dactor away
do exercise regular→regularly
做運動應該是用“take” exercise或直接寫exercise，“do” exercise 好像是做功課，做習題
被講完了.
前面都說完了 ........
should打錯
你打完可以先放WORD在PO上來
沒問題了
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