Diary 1
On the New Year's Eve, our family had a big dinner together. It's a rare change. Everyone is too busy to eat together. My mom is a good chef. She is good at cooking. We ate very full that night. The adult chated themself, and the children played the game together. After dinner, it's the point of the day---get red envelope. Every children expected to get the lucky money, to make our new is lucky, ritht? After that, we went out to burn the firework. We all had a great time that night.
posted by 林小雞 @ 2:37 AM
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After dinner, it's the point of the ...
After dinner, it was the point ....
get red..
got red....
money, to make...
to 前的逗號可以不用吧
adults
fireworks
"The adult chated themself,"should be "...themselves";"ritht?"should be "right"(spelling)
Well, it seems to be a very good memory, doesn't it?
every "child"
every+單數N
to make our new is lucky,
什麼意思??
make our new is lucky.看不懂意思耶
chat的過去式是"chatted"
and the children played the ...children 前面應該不用加 the
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