Diary 2
Today we went to the reservoir where is in the Tainan county with my family. We didn't go outing for a long time together. To pass the new year, everybody went to go out, so the roads were fulled with the car. We arrived there with great difficulty. The air was very fresh that I liked very much. We picniced besides the reservoir, and watched the beautiful view, too.When we finished our lunch, we decided to row a boat. It's my first time to row. How interesting it is! We also took a lot of picture. Surely, we took many featured product to home. What a tired day is!
posted by 林小雞 @ 4:45 AM
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went to go out
寫went out即可
fulled with the cars
I liked very ...
I like it very....
It was my first...
How interesting it was!
We also took a lot of picture.
picture可加s
What a tired day it was!
We didn't go outing for a long time together.
I think "together" should put
before "for a long time"...
I know the place..
I have been there several times..
It's very beautiful over there.
Picture should be pictures.I like this sentence:We arrived there with great difficulty.In my opinion, I think you can plus "a" before great difficulty.
so the roads were fulled with the car.
應該要用"filled with cars"
或者是"full of cars"
We also took a lot of picture
picture要加s
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