It’s important to choose the TV program carefully. Though televisions are the most important channel which offer the information and entertainment, he may have some faults. Some programs which are full of violence and lust will have a worse influence on teenagers. It takes much time to watch TV will have poor eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the programs that are helpful for us. The most importantly, don’t be a TV fans.
Exercise3 Computer
Computer plays an important role in our daily life. It not only can help students to hand in homework quickly but also can send the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, you are sure to remind yourself, you can’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most parents don’t like their children depend on computer, especially, the discussion of bulletin board wastes much time.
posted by 林小雞 @ 8:35 PM
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televisions 用單數即可
he 是人稱
電視用it 吧
will have poor ...
主詞不是人怎麼會have
傷眼睛
用do harm..或hurt比較好
TV fans是照字面翻嗎
我不知道這可不可以但是我建議用
couch potato
第二篇
It not only can help ....
It can not only heip..
you are sure to ..
用be sure即可
like 後面加ving 或to V
especially是副詞前面用分號
"he may have some faults" should be "it...";"don’t be a TV fans.
"seems not very good.
"you are sure to remind yourself, you can’t sit in front of the computer for a long time"should be"be sure to...";"the discussion of bulletin board wastes much time"is wrong, check out!
It takes much time to watch TV "will have poor" eyesight.
這句怪怪...
It not only can help students to hand in homework quickly but also can send the information in time.
也可以用
It can not only...but also...
沒有tv fan這種說法唷
a TV fans
a 後面也不能加s
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用It can not only help好像比較順耶!
It takes much time to watch TV will have poor eyesight.這句怪怪的
TV fan老師好像說沒這個用法
It takes much time to watch TV will have poor eyesight.
我覺得用 spend 比較順
information 是不可數前面不用加 the
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