The Impresa
After dinner, John’s father sat in the living room and called John to come in. Then he gave his father the report card which was this semester’s grade. He was very nervous because he didn’t know what relation of his father would be.For a short while, his father said, “well done, son, but you can’t be proud.” His father didn’t want him to be conceited. And continued,” the success of the one time doesn't represent lasting success.” How impressive it was! That would be always in John's mind.
posted by 林小雞 @ 5:33 AM
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"John’s father sat in the living room and called John to come in" should be"...sat on the sofa in the living ..."
grade加s
For a short while我覺得for a while 即可for a short while 當然也可以
And continued,”...
好像沒主詞
And he contiuned..
which was this semester’s grade.
不是要用無生命所有格嗎
the grade of this semester.
your idea is really creative!
keep going!
It would be alway in my mind, too.
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你的想法真是不同
what relation of his father would be.→relation shoud be reaction
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