Autobiography
I am Erica Lin, a seventeen-year-old positive girl from Kaohsiung county.There are four members in my family. My dad has a mild temper, he lets me know how to treat humans. My mom is good at cooking that we always dine together on the weekend and talk about our life. I have a sister who is older than I like my friend.Due to we always have heart-to-heart talk which will make me feel better. I adore my whole family. I feel lucky enough to grow in such a great home. They make me have a positive attitude.I like play volleyball since I have been a senior high student. At that time, we had a volleyball competition which made our class unite together and won the champion. It’s a good memory in my mind. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like listening to pop music, especially rock music which make me stimulate when I feel tired. Another one is reading many sorts of books, to get some information and kill the time.
posted by 林小雞 @ 6:45 PM
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treat humans
這樣怪怪的
treat others即可
My mom is good at cooking that we ....
My mom is good at cooking,and we ....
Due to we always have heart-to-heart talk which ....
Because we always...
like+ving or to v
Another one 用besides in addition或moreover..叫好
Due to+N.;Because+Clause
I never see this-I feel lucky enough(I am not sure whether it is right)
Sure! The volleyball game really unites us together.
Hi Erica:
a great home
用
a great family
聽起來好像比較好ㄝ
還有
which make me stimulate
用makes喔!
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we had a volleyball competition
也不是什麼錯誤只是覺得用多數比較好
Due to 跟上面說的一樣
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