Autobiography-----Draft two
I am Erica Lin, a seventeen-year-old positive girl from Kaohsiung county.There are four members in my family. My dad has a mild temper, he lets me know how to treat others. My mom is good at cooking and we always dine together on the weekend and talk about our life. I have a sister who is older than I like my friend.Because we always have heart-to-heart talk which will make me feel better. I adore my whole family. I feel lucky enough to grow in such a great family. They make me have a positive attitude.
I like play volleyball since I have been a senior high student. At that time, we had volleyball competitions which made our class unite together and won the champion. It’s a good memory in my mind. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like listening to pop music, especially rock music which make me stimulate when I feel tired. Another one is reading many sorts of books, to get some information and kill the time.Sometimes I try to read English books. Hopelly, I can through the way to increase my English skill.
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I am Erica Lin, a seventeen-year-old positive girl from Kaohsiung county. There are four members in my family. My dad has a mild temper, and he teaches me how to treat others. My mom is good at cooking and we always dine together on the weekend and talk about our life. My elder sister is like my friend. We always have heart-to-heart chats which makes me feel better. I adore my whole family, and I feel lucky enough to grow in such a great family because they make me have a positive attitude.
I like play volleyball when I was a senior high student. At that time, we had volleyball competitions, and our class united together to win the championship. It's a good memory in my mind. Besides, I also like some quiet activities, like listening to pop music, especially rock music. It makes me feel energetic. Another one is reading many sorts of books to get some information and kill the time.
* 請看下面句子的句型結構。
---I have a sister who is older than I like my friend.
---we had volleyball competitions which made our class unite together and won the champion.
* 第二段缺concluding sentence，請增加。
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