A Dream I had---Draft 2
I have dreamed variety of dreams. Some of them were wonderful, the others were terrible. One day I dreamed that I got up late in a certain morning, hoping time could pause. Amazingly, it indeed happened to me. I couldn't believe that I had a power which could make time break. So I went into raptures to show off it to the people everywhere. Besides, I counted on my power whenever I wanted. Consequently, the magical power was out of my control. When I wanted it passed quickly to skip disgusting exams or boring dates, it just wore on like years, vise versa. Finally, my time was uncontrollable until I swallowed the last breath. Then I awoke frighteningly. It was a awful dream. But the dream alerted me to grasp time as possible as I can.
posted by 林小雞 @ 8:06 AM
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I have dreamed a variety of dreams. Some of them were wonderful, while the others were terrible. One day I dreamed that I got up late in a morning, hoping time could pause. Amazingly, it indeed happened to me. I couldn't believe that I had a power which could make time break???. So I went into raptures to show it off to the people everywhere. Besides, I used my power whenever I wanted. Consequently, the magical power was out of my control. When I wanted to pass disgusting exams or boring days quickly, it just wore on like years, vise versa. Finally, my time was uncontrollable until I swallowed the last breath. Then I awoke frighteningly. It was a awful dream. But the dream alerted me to grasp time as much as I can.
* It would be better if you described how things were out of control and how the dream made you feel frightened.
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