Autobiography2
After the entrance examination for Senior High Schools, I was admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior School, and I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the first year, I took part in Thesis Contest which was national senior high school competition and I got the first place. That thing which reminded myself not being easy to give up, and you would succeed. Now I promote my English skill and keep progressing. I will keep going to learn more new things in my senior life.I have made up my mind to study the Department of Foreign Language.
I hope that I can study aboard to widen knowledge. But before that I should study hard and pass the entrance examination to colleges, and get into a great technical university. To have my dream come true, I will do my best.
posted by 林小雞 @ 8:49 PM
8 Comments:
"That thing which reminded myself not being easy to give up, and you would succeed."the two subjects of these 2 sentences should be the same.
That thing which reminded myself not being easy to give up, and you would succeed.
I think it would better to be:
That thing which reminded me not to give up easily, then I would succeed.
and you would
我建議用i would be..
first place?拼錯
that I should study hard and pass the entrance
study hard "to" pass
我覺得那是目的應該用to
You can write more about you.
Such as your junior high school life.
大概就這樣了吧..
That's all.
講的差不多了!
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