The most Unforgettable Trip I've ever had-----Draft One
There was a trip which I went to Kending with my friends is unforgettable. When we arrived there, it was shower suddenly. However, it didn’t affect our good mood, and we kept going our project. First, we went to rent vehicles to be convenient, knowing the local people who invited us to BBQ together were enthusiastic. Then we had the aquatic activities that I never had. The specialist taught us how to breath in the water, but I still drank much water in the sea. Nevertheless, we all had a good time in the water. At night, we walked around at the night market until the local people lent us to a secret place where normal tourists wouldn’t know at all. Fortunately, the weather was fine that we could see the star full of the whole sky. It was the first time that I experienced what is so-called the starry night; moreover, we chatted to our new friends cheerfully with the beautiful sky. This is the first time I took a trip myself without the family was precious. People said the first time is always unforgettable even though it was ordinary.
posted by 林小雞 @ 7:13 AM
1 Comments:
I don't know the meaning of this-"it was shower suddenly."
"we chatted to our new friends cheerfully with the beautiful sky."should be"...with our new..."
" People said the first time is always unforgettable even though it was ordinary.
"should be"...say the first..."
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